Поднимаю для проявившихся ваниписовцев в ПЧ. Народ, если вы знаете, инглиш - скажите, соответствует ли это духу истории?

There are two treasures in this world.
The first - a faraway island. Noone ever saw it, noone can tell about it. You can't even be sure it really exists. You may search for it all your life, never find it and die happy. The journey is your reward.

But there is another one - 'ushinatta takara', lost treasure. Treasure that you owned and that now is gone. It's kept inside the most guarded stronghold in all the seas. If you try to attack it, you'll most likely lose your life. But you can't stop trying to return this treasure. Because you'll never be happy without it.
Your beloved one's, your friend's smile.

Люди, шарящие в инглише лучше меня, please, advise. Я хочу эту виньетку отшлифовать, чисто для себя